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Keeping It in the Family Ch. 01

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by Anonymous

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by oldnornry05/16/14

I wish...

it was that simple. Oh what fun I would have. Very creative fantasy.
Thanks!

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by prop6905/16/14

Chapter 2

WIsh you would have made the story longer describing your sexual acts.

An interesting twist would be that she was never hypnotized. She was horny from discussions with her sister and thought it was a game. She decided to play along because she wanted to fuck you and this would be a great way to do it.

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by SLeM05/17/14

Maybe should be in Mind Control

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by GirlWatchin05/17/14

Great story, but...

I really enjoyed your story, but I wish you had gone farther. It might have been interesting had Ann driven away just as his wife turned the corner coming home. And, perhaps... what happened when Ann got home and her hubby found her pussy full of another mans cum, oozing through the new black panties? All I'm saying, is that I believe you might have pursued this story further.

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by redlion7505/17/14

why didnt he just use the dumb thing on his wife so he wouldnt be a cheating asshole?personally i hate stories when one person has no say in the relationship as in mind control/hypnosis it always seems like rape to me.

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