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Dusk At Dawn

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by greenmountaineer05/01/14

Very nice. The sparse words suggest more than what is written. I began thinking about the cycle of life.

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by Oldbear6305/01/14

Really nice

Dawn - i could see it and thought it was beautiful. Read then read it again very slowly with my mind more focused. Really enjoyed this

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by Ashesh905/05/14

There's a Mystical connect between the twins :

Dusk & Dawn !

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by tazz31705/05/14

MAKES ONE WONDER ABOUT THE TWINS

1 IS BLACK AND WHITE THE OTHER IS WHITE AND BLACK AS YOU FACE THEM. tk u mlj lv nv

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