A Game of Dress-Up

Great story.

Love these types of erotica.

Wonderful!

Dr M, I loved this story, as well as Chapter Two. Again, it had a great sense of going somewhere, along with an undeniable naughty eroticism that gripped you from the first paragraph. Like the first commentator, I LOVE these types of stories.

Wow

This is the first story I read of yours and I have to say that it was incredible!

I intend to read more...

*Honey

Delicious

Quite a tasty little morsel! A favorite theme of mine--the forbidden fantasy fulfilled (almost) by force. And generously sprinkled with such sweet accents as:

"...her lipstick was so shiny it was almost obscene, as if her lover's semen still glistened on her lips."

Excellent Story...

Wow. You're a great writer, and your story was very hot. I hope to read more :)

Wow

Wow.. awesome. I love the fluidity and vividness of your writing!

And the fantasy is one of mine too...

Keep it COMING!

incredible..

Your story left my panties soaked..mmm, good job..:)

it is a good story...

this story gets a heart rate up. The emotions...the words used. You did a nice job. Your writing is excellent and the thoughts are good. Original!

On the money...

Reading this story was like reading one of my deepest, darkest fantasies. In fact, I can still remember the first time I dressed up like a little slut just to masturbate... :)

To say that I enjoyed your story would be an understatement. I'm sure I'll be back to read it again soon...

Keep up the good work sugar, I look forward to more from you. ;)

Hot, Arousing tale

I liked the way you got into her head. I also liked how you described her.

wow

fuckin wonderful sexiest story iv rd so far thanks

holy s***

fawn, fawn
gush, gush
etc. etc.

love it

i was cumming just readin it

HOT

so hot ! well written ! umm kinda wet now ;)

Wow.

Unbelievable. You should really write more, this was incredibly erotic. I'm not ashamed to say that I masturbated while I read it... and I never do that. :)

So very sexy

THIs was the most erotic i have read recenntly. Love to hear more of her

very good

great job with the psychological detail--that's what makes or breaks it.

oh yeah

This is an amazing story!! I love how her thoughts were so confused, and how Mr. Taylor then tells her he's free next weekend. That made me laugh :P. It was really well written!!! AWESOMENESS ^^

That lucky Bitch!

Damn I wish this was me!

Yes

That was so good thankyou.

Actually

What I really want to read is how she prepares herself for next Saturday. What she wears, preferably sluttier, what toys she brings, and how she begs for it!

What happened to the other chapters?

I liked the other chapters - where did they go?

The Rest of the Story

For those of you who've asked, I'd like to say that this story is actually just the first chapter in a book called, "A Game of Dress-Up", published by Ellora's Cave. Literotica rules prevent me from posting a link to the book, but if you google "Ellora's Cave" and then do an author search on Elliot Mabeuse, you should be able to read the rest of Vanessa and Mr. Taylor's story.

My sincere thanks to all who have enjoyed the story and taken the trouble to comment on it. May all your dreams come true. :-)

Wow indeed....

I think I might get that book :)

this story heals sexual injuries

The way you first set up an all too familiar female inner conflict, and then use raw and nasty poetic artillery to indirectly document a woman's transgression, liberation, and transcendence, is quite unforgettable.

Thank you.

- GreenOrgyKing

Huge Fan

I love your work. This story in particular especially. Your words, what she goes through.. Certainly set up many a good night for me. Thank you

Is there more?

I could have sworn I read this awhile back and it was the first part of a three stories. The second story took place in Mr. Taylor's house and the third story took place in Vegas. Am I crazy? Maybe it was written by someone else. Either way, thanks for this story - so awesome!

Yes, oh yes. It could have been a story about me - right down to me being taken by one of my mother's frends. Mmmmmmmmmmmmm

OH YES

A nice sexy story.

Can we have more please, as suggested by other peoples comments

You cad sir!

That was no whore, that was my sister!
But I didn't know she was that good at anything.
Well done, good piece.