All Comments on 'A Dream Vacation Ch. 01'

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jaybird1944jaybird1944almost 10 years ago
Very nice

chapter 2 soon please

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Romance story writing at its finest

The first chapter in a Dream Vacation is superior story-telling, and the romantic qualities of it are given with great skill by the writer; a great start to a romance story.

Rancher46Rancher46over 2 years ago

what a sensual tale. Well done 5 stars

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Very nicely done indeed.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

10 stars. JP maybe has found true happiness. Her name may be mommy...

HtslHtsl5 months ago

Wow, what a story! 5/5

I just wonder, what following parts could have for us. A romance story would be finished for me here.

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