This is not really a flashback / but in the story series it does seems that way. I got the idea long after the others - and it just had to be written - and of course posted.
Thanks for the reading!.
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Anonymous05/10/14
good story
I'm enjoying the story as it loops and comes up to now. The warmth and feeling and the developement of the characters is most enjoyable. Look forward to the coming chapters Why do I feel like there is some surprises ahead?? Maybe a little inter-family developement?? Lets wait and see. Thank you.
GP
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Anonymous05/11/14
so-so
sounds like you had a brain fart but wanted to post something so you wrote a chapter that should have been part of chapter one. when will you continue the REAL story? this was slightly disappointing.
Being creative with ideas and then having the mindset and writing them is an interesting and difficult challenge to any writer. And one seldom has control over creative inspiration when it occurs. I think most of us writers try to see past the limitations that many 'Anonymous' have when they go to critiquing another's work and efforts as we 'fail' to meet their 'very high standards.' Perhaps you should give it a try. - Rugrat60.
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Anonymous10/02/15
have to agree with so-so
the last two chapters were a major disappointment get the story back on track.
English
was this a flashback?
A Flashback?
This is not really a flashback / but in the story series it does seems that way. I got the idea long after the others - and it just had to be written - and of course posted.
Thanks for the reading!.
good story
I'm enjoying the story as it loops and comes up to now. The warmth and feeling and the developement of the characters is most enjoyable. Look forward to the coming chapters Why do I feel like there is some surprises ahead?? Maybe a little inter-family developement?? Lets wait and see. Thank you.
GP
so-so
sounds like you had a brain fart but wanted to post something so you wrote a chapter that should have been part of chapter one. when will you continue the REAL story? this was slightly disappointing.
To Disappointed Anonymous
Being creative with ideas and then having the mindset and writing them is an interesting and difficult challenge to any writer. And one seldom has control over creative inspiration when it occurs. I think most of us writers try to see past the limitations that many 'Anonymous' have when they go to critiquing another's work and efforts as we 'fail' to meet their 'very high standards.' Perhaps you should give it a try. - Rugrat60.
have to agree with so-so
the last two chapters were a major disappointment get the story back on track.
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