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Above an Alpha Ch. 06

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by Anonymous

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by Shadowreader705/05/14

Welcome back

Not much to show for a two year wait but it's something at least. Again welcome back and looking forward to more chapters

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by Anonymous05/05/14

disappointed

I'm wondering if I should be happy or angry, coz I was glad to see that you have posted a new chapter after a long time of waiting, then I saw the length, to me I feel that you should not have posted in the first place, this is disappointing???????

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by Anonymous05/05/14

2 years and that's it?! 1*

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by Anonymous05/05/14

Hey...please give me more!!! This is a great story!! Continue please

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by Anonymous05/07/14

Currently crying on the inside

Lol, i was hoping that maybe you posted additions of your stories on a regular basis but apparently that's not the case. Of course, the one story i fall in love with will probably take a life time to be finished. I fully understand that you have a life to live and you deserve to live it the way you want to, whether it be writing a few chapters of this amazing story or not. Anyways, i love everything about it... you are an amazing and imaginative writer. I'm definitely a fan!

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by Wsdempsey05/16/14

So happy to see you're back

I don't actually check into non-human stories very often, mostly when I'm in the mood for something a little different, and there's only ever been one ongoing series I was truly interested in- this one. So imagine my completely pleasant surprise at checking in here and seeing you'd posted another story. I went back and read the others just to refresh myself, and then enjoyed this latest installment. I wish it would have been a little longer, but I've wished that for each entry in the past, also. I'm just glad you're posting stories again, and really look forward to reading more.

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by Anonymous05/18/14

1 page????

1 page teaser,,to keep us coming back or just an after thought?Not really worth reading at the rate until there are at least 4 or 5 1 page "chapters"...It was ok,,nothing that super,,,and posting every 4 or 5 months,,just a bit slow,,,,will find someone who takes their writing seriously,,,

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by Anonymous07/21/15

Is there a chapter 7 in the works PlainJanie12? Oh, please say yes!

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by Anonymous12/16/15

Chapter 7 at all?

I do hope that you intend to create a chapter 7 and 8 I really do. This is a compelling universe. I beg of you to not let it end like this.

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