All Comments on 'Above an Alpha Ch. 06'

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Shadowreader7Shadowreader7almost 10 years ago
Welcome back

Not much to show for a two year wait but it's something at least. Again welcome back and looking forward to more chapters

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
disappointed

I'm wondering if I should be happy or angry, coz I was glad to see that you have posted a new chapter after a long time of waiting, then I saw the length, to me I feel that you should not have posted in the first place, this is disappointing???????

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago

2 years and that's it?! 1*

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago

Hey...please give me more!!! This is a great story!! Continue please

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Currently crying on the inside

Lol, i was hoping that maybe you posted additions of your stories on a regular basis but apparently that's not the case. Of course, the one story i fall in love with will probably take a life time to be finished. I fully understand that you have a life to live and you deserve to live it the way you want to, whether it be writing a few chapters of this amazing story or not. Anyways, i love everything about it... you are an amazing and imaginative writer. I'm definitely a fan!

WsdempseyWsdempseyalmost 10 years ago
So happy to see you're back

I don't actually check into non-human stories very often, mostly when I'm in the mood for something a little different, and there's only ever been one ongoing series I was truly interested in- this one. So imagine my completely pleasant surprise at checking in here and seeing you'd posted another story. I went back and read the others just to refresh myself, and then enjoyed this latest installment. I wish it would have been a little longer, but I've wished that for each entry in the past, also. I'm just glad you're posting stories again, and really look forward to reading more.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
1 page????

1 page teaser,,to keep us coming back or just an after thought?Not really worth reading at the rate until there are at least 4 or 5 1 page "chapters"...It was ok,,nothing that super,,,and posting every 4 or 5 months,,just a bit slow,,,,will find someone who takes their writing seriously,,,

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

Is there a chapter 7 in the works PlainJanie12? Oh, please say yes!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Chapter 7 at all?

I do hope that you intend to create a chapter 7 and 8 I really do. This is a compelling universe. I beg of you to not let it end like this.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Oh Crap!

Another unfinished story :(

MalkeusMalkeusabout 6 years ago
Unfulfilled promise.

So common. So disappointing.

ZZchromosomeZZchromosomealmost 5 years ago

Well darn, I guess we'll never know how this ends.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

Damn it .... your end to this sucks

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Please finish this story! I love this story.

wishful_inkerwishful_inker9 months ago

This was an amazing story. I'm mesmerized by the world you created, and wish you'd come back to finish this story. Brava!

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Writer. Hasn't finished all of her stories because life proves more and more difficult every. damn. year. But she's still trying.

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