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Welcome back
Not much to show for a two year wait but it's something at least. Again welcome back and looking forward to more chapters
disappointed
I'm wondering if I should be happy or angry, coz I was glad to see that you have posted a new chapter after a long time of waiting, then I saw the length, to me I feel that you should not have posted in the first place, this is disappointing???????
2 years and that's it?! 1*
Hey...please give me more!!! This is a great story!! Continue please
Currently crying on the inside
Lol, i was hoping that maybe you posted additions of your stories on a regular basis but apparently that's not the case. Of course, the one story i fall in love with will probably take a life time to be finished. I fully understand that you have a life to live and you deserve to live it the way you want to, whether it be writing a few chapters of this amazing story or not. Anyways, i love everything about it... you are an amazing and imaginative writer. I'm definitely a fan!
So happy to see you're back
I don't actually check into non-human stories very often, mostly when I'm in the mood for something a little different, and there's only ever been one ongoing series I was truly interested in- this one. So imagine my completely pleasant surprise at checking in here and seeing you'd posted another story. I went back and read the others just to refresh myself, and then enjoyed this latest installment. I wish it would have been a little longer, but I've wished that for each entry in the past, also. I'm just glad you're posting stories again, and really look forward to reading more.
1 page????
1 page teaser,,to keep us coming back or just an after thought?Not really worth reading at the rate until there are at least 4 or 5 1 page "chapters"...It was ok,,nothing that super,,,and posting every 4 or 5 months,,just a bit slow,,,,will find someone who takes their writing seriously,,,
Is there a chapter 7 in the works PlainJanie12? Oh, please say yes!
Chapter 7 at all?
I do hope that you intend to create a chapter 7 and 8 I really do. This is a compelling universe. I beg of you to not let it end like this.
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