Figure 8 Ch. 09a

Unexpected Delight

Thanks so much for posting. I have been following this since the beginning. What a treat. The only thing which left me unsatisfied is that I have no idea where I can get coconut pancakes with warm apples :o(

WOOHOO

Just enough to whet the appetite...sort of lol
Thankyou so much.
Cant wait to read more!

Looking forward to Ch 9b!

Any idea when that'll be up? This story has me hooked!

????

is that it now?

No more story?

Please can we have

the next chapter? Pretty please?

Opinion on an ending

I love reading your story thus far and encourage you to go further with it; your characters are rich, complex and very intriguing.

With regards to the ending of the story, it's obvious that Emma needs to find some closure with Adam but I'd love to see her find a final ending with sylar. Your plot thus far has set up that event perfectly while still remaining honest and true to how difficult first love and friendship can be. Kudos! But it's obvious that sylar and Emma are the most interesting and rewarding pairing. Personally, I just love their dynamic. Similar and yet opposites :)

Can't wait for more.
Xo
Elizabeth

One of the best stories in Literotica!!

Your characters are so distinct and have a life of their own, and your storyline and writing style follow a very nice tempo. Please continue the series! We need to know what happens next!!

Additionally…

I'm still ansty to see how Emma and Sylar end up in the situation described in Chapter 1! I hope that's a mislead and Emma and Sylar end up as life partners.

Also, what is Emma's tattoo of?
And will she ever be introduced to giving Sylar oral?

Just want to know…

When you think you'll post the next parts? Just a general time frame… I don't mean to pressure or rush you but these characters are so alive in my head. I am craving for the developments that follow!

Please Finish!

I think of this story often, and would really love to see it finished!