Loving Him

Again excellent and very moving

Everything I said on ‘Raining Glass Hearts’ applies to this. It proves it was no fluke.

Great structure, great progression, great ‘voice’. Some nice images & phrases ‘His voice made me choke on my sadness’, ‘Casts shadows on future possibilities’ but again an awful lot of the phrases are standard at the very least – though again you manage to pull it off.

I am now really looking forward to your next poem. Keep up the good work – please.

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Love the progression leading me onward, left me wanting more. Well done and thanks for the read.

Such pain in unrequited love. It's an irrational thing.

you have an uncanny

Ability to convey emotional content to a reader without it coming across as a angst ridden teenager, have always enjoyed your work.