Allison and I at A House Party

been there done that

even go a gift once the doc cured

Glad I'm not married to this whore

You can have her.

It's a blast, isn't it?

We have been to house parties where my wife has been extremely active with a variety of men too. Of course, I always get to have her first and last.

re: Glad I'm not married to this whore

If she's a whore,. what does that make him? What, it's okay for him to fuck around but not her? The story starts with stating they are swingers, which means BOTH of them a fucking others, not just her.

There’s been a lot of discussion on this site regarding what some commenters have posted on Loving Wives stories. Generally, I’ve taken the stance that each person should comment on a story and let others have their opinion, pro or con. Those who slam the story, even when it’s over the top, generally stick to commenting on the story. Those who slam others with terms such as “hater” or “troll” tend to be pro the story. You can reply to what someone else has said without slamming them. I commented on why I disagreed with this person, but not their right to have such an opinion.

However, comments such as this one are admittedly troublesome with that stance. The comments pretty much boil down to slamming the story for being cliché, but the comments themselves are cliché. This one is an example of the “husband fucking is good but wife fucking is bad” cliché slam.

Personally, I start all stories at 3. A story has to earn a higher rating. If I feel the story is written by rote, that is the same-old, same-old, I’ll deduct points. This story was not written by rote, so, yeah, I’ll raise the rating a bit. (It’s damned hard to get a 5. Superlatives should be given sparingly.)

Yikes

I wouldn't fuck this slut with someone else's dick, yuck, this is like dog's in a ally.

Green eyes or impotence

The were a few errors in the grammer but the action was awesome and very enjoyable to me !

Another poor day for reading anything decent in loving wives

Given the titles, description and tags for today's stories it's another good day for the cuckold lovers but for the rest of us that don't get turned on by cuckold stories it's normal fare. I read where the good stories are going to be hidden in the different categories so loving wives can truly belong to the cuckolds. What a poor excuse of a site that doesn't have the balls to divide loving wives into categories, ie. cheating wives(unfaithful to your partner and the consequences ), Cuckold-(female holds sexual power in relationship) Wife Lovers-(slut wives, hot and horny wives, wife swapping) These are distinctive categories that would more clearly identify what the story is about. What's so difficult about that? The cuckolds want the cheating wives stories thrown out of loving wives since they believe this category is strictly for the cuckolds and it seems the owners of the site agree. Well, I for one, am moving my stories to another site.

only on this

site do the sickos talk like their real people.ugh

Unfortunately the moderators are letting only the wimp/cuck/slut shit stay in this category.

Too bad!

Shoot the messenger

These self-styled "critics"--almost always anonymous--have no concept or appreciation of what constitutes good pornography.
Their ignorance and bigotry is only exceeded by their conceited notions of what constitutes good writing.

Oh My!

Little Billie Smyth has his panties in a knot, sorry little dude but this is bad fetish, cockold and bi or gay, not good writing and not erotic unless you are a serious pervert.

Yeah Willie

Frontline needs help sucking the cum out of Cuckerotica Leader Lauren.

Go lend him your lips you faggy cocksucker.

All of this is why any author who cares about this category ought to just turn off anonymous comments. It takes away the soap box of the petty little anonymous trolls.

Fun story, and exactly what this category needs more of, both because it's fun and because it pisses off the anons, and anything that does that is good in my book.

Woop, here it tis

Karen,

These stories while fiction are not that great that you should be putting down others. Write about the story, Karen. If the story is good or great in your opinion, then comment on the story and convince us that it is a great story, but not you, just like a left winged liberal, attack the person who disagrees with you. Weather it be Anno or someone by name, at least give them the same consideration that you expect from them. I too am disappointed in the direction this section has gone, most of the good writers have left it. Can anyone tell me, what section they are writing under? SS06, Ohio, radk and others have left us. Where have you gone, Joe DiMaggio?

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The only problem I have with this story is that it's in the wrong category. "Group sex" would be more appropriate. But I understand that it's more fun to post in LW because of the idiotic comments from the He-Man Woman Haters Club -- and they certainly didn't disappoint with this story.

As for the story itself, there was plenty of action -- almost too much action to be believable, really. But in the realm of fantasy, it works just fine. My advice to the author is: don't rush through the sex scenes. Take the time to describe the action, the feelings of the characters, etc., and let us know a little more about them so that we can connect with them as people instead of merely sexual objects. I really enjoyed your first story, and I enjoyed this one as well, but you have the potential to be even better, IMHO. Keep it up.

P.S.

One more piece of advice: don't describe the physical traits of your characters in one paragraph, like you're reeling off the stats of an all-pro tackle. Instead, integrate those traits into your narrative. For example: "She held her firm, round ass high in the air, and he grabbed her autumn hair and jerked her head back...", etc..

And please don't use measurements to describe those traits. This site is littered with bra sizes and dick measurements (always 8" or more), and it gets tiresome to read it over and over again.

Another good adventure

But when is cuckold going to start cleaning cock and pussy. I think he would enjoy it. Also is she going to agree to DP? I would have rated both your story's with 4's, but the rating thing is messed up. I also normally comment with my user name, but that is screwed up as well.