Domestic Discipline

Excelent Start

Looking forward to seeing how this story progresses

hmm

I'm not quite certain where this is going, but it seems less like consensual BDSM and more like slavery. I hope there is more development/plot in the future. Maybe this should be on the sci fi category?

If Otto likes it

Then I know I can't. Impossible to respect the opinion of a person who takes the name of a "philosopher" whose writings the Nazis used as their inspiration. It's a free internet. Even racists are allowed in. [If I don't read it, I don't rate it - so no worries on your part, Duchess].

Thanks, Otto, for saving me the time. Please always leave an endorsement of the stories you like, so I'll know to avoid them. It's a great time saver.

Excuse me, mr. anonymous

If you are "kind" enough to leave a comment, please make sure that it is related to the story, otherwise you are simply spamming and in this case you are also beeing rude. No one appreciates that.

I actually love this idea. wish you did more

The Best

I just love your stories. Need more!

Write more, please!

Your stories, and the world in them, are very hot! I love them. Please keep writing.

Amazing story!

I have read all three parts, looking forward to part four

Great fantasy!

I love your amazing imagination. Part one does an excellent job f establishing the boundaries of your world. I'm so sorry to see only three parts! I was growing attached to your characters. Keep writing!