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by Anonymous

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by UnderYourSpell05/06/14

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Wasn't sure at first and the typos let it down, but I can hear this as a Rap and particularly like the last stanza. Much in advance of the usual dirty ditty. Thanks for the read.

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by Magnetron05/07/14

it does come off as a bit of a rap to me as well, but only in the initial block. Afterwards is a well maintained rhythm. I don't really see a relationship between the title and the story.

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