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Storm's coming

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by todski2805/05/14

intetesting

Evocative work I'll pop back and comment more later.

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by Oldbear6305/06/14

Really enjoyed this Niki

Thats a great description of a good storm by someone who appreciates a good storm.
Don't go out and play but a rocking chair on the porch would be good...

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by tazz31705/06/14

THE STORM PRECEDES

the tempest within, TK U MLJ LV NV

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by Magnetron05/07/14

Nicely done. No distractions leads to a smooth read from beginning to end.

I assume it was submitted to the Erotic section by mistake?

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