I Told You So Ch. 13

Your Going Light on the Sex Isn't a Problem

You are such a skilled writer that your foregoing a lot of sexual content doesn't detract. Your characters are well drawn. The overall plot is really good.
As a reader, I am now "invested" in them. I'm curious to see where the story goes.

Keep up the good work. If it is appropriate to throw in some more sexual adventures, great. Throw them in. If the sex gets in the way of the overall story, leave it out. The story of these characters is good enough we can get along without the sex. (I can't believe I just wrote that--but I did. I meant it, too.)

Wow, thanks! I really appreciate the compliment. :)

Great Story!

Stumbled on your story by chance and began reading from chapter 10. Really enjoyed the story I had to go back to the beginning & start over. Characters ate well developed & the storyline gets you hooked. I can't wait til the next chapter comes out to see what happens next. Please hurry! :)

Love it

Have read your stories from the beginning and I am hooked and I cant wait for more :)