As most healthy teenage males spend half (or more) of their waking lives with involuntary erections, I thought that your introduction was a little superfluous. You could have just started the story where you mounted the bus and it would have worked just as well.
Well that said, very enjoyable first effort. I shall look out for more of your stories in the near future.
Tom D
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You don't need the preamble....
As most healthy teenage males spend half (or more) of their waking lives with involuntary erections, I thought that your introduction was a little superfluous. You could have just started the story where you mounted the bus and it would have worked just as well.
Well that said, very enjoyable first effort. I shall look out for more of your stories in the near future.
Tom D
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