The story was reeeally rushed! ....and was this story written by a virgin? The hymen is outside at the entrance, not buried half way in...and you can't hit the G spot fucking doggie style, the dick is curved the wrong way! Its kind of a bitch trying to hit it with your dick anyway... Now if shes on her back with her ass on the edge of the bed (or kitchen table;) and the guy is standing, sngling his thrusts like he's trying to poke her bellybutton from the inside out, you get the general direction...
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Anonymous08/02/14
@Mike2501, I agree 100%
This was obviously written by a guy trying to write in Opposite Sex voice who a) never did Biology 101, or paid any attention if he did, and b) was too fucking lazy to do some basic research, choosing instead to ape the ignorance of half the other male (and quite a few female) writers on this site and in this category. It's omissions like this, easily checked stuff, that shows just how rushed this 'story' really is. I can't give this more than three stars, the intent was there, but the effort is sorely lacking.
Unfortunately, my story probably seems rushed as it was my first ever submission, and I hadn't written anything in a long time. And actually, guys have hit my G Spot during Doggie Style so... clearly you're doing something wrong :)
And in reply to the anonymous person who commented after mike2501: I can't even take you seriously as you start with "This was obviously written by a guy..." because no, I am a female. At least you're right about me never studying Biology, and I probably fucked up the hymen part because mine was already broken before I lost my virginity so, meh, I wouldn't know and I really didn't care. Cut me some slack. Constructive feedback is always good but you didn't have to be a sarcastic prick.
Thanks for reading :)
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Anonymous08/24/14
Needs
I for one can forgive the references to human anatomy. The story was well told and hot as heck, stroked my own member as long as I could before joining in her second climax. For me it was just what I needed to read at the moment.
Please don't let the ignorant comments discourage you. I enjoyed the story. Yes, a bit rushed but hot. Has me VERY wet right now, imagining myself as daddy's girl, so I say "a job well done! ". Especially for your first ever submission! And.men have absolutely hit my g spot during doggy style. A man just needs to learn how to move into a woman to give her maximal pleasure. I hope you write more daddy/daughter stories. Definitely my most visited fantasy.
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Anonymous01/08/15
fuck
the writer is a fucking Virgin,before you write another story go out .
I agree, writer is either a total virgin or an idiot, or both. Even if you've never fucked a virgin it doesn't take thirty seconds on google to find pictures and descriptions that tell and show you the hymen is up front, not a few inches in, not half way in, ugh!
...then theres the G-spot, which you've apparently never bothered to find on a girl. You can't fuck a girl doggie style and hit the G-spot, hell its difficult as fuck to hit it with your dick anyway without getting at an angle that would drag your dick on the bottom of the outer lips, usually irritating them because they won't have enough lubrication on them. Thats why its either fingers or a shaped toy. The spots on the front side of her body, not the back. A curved dick isnt anywhere near it fucking doggie and not curved enough fucking missionary.
Go back to school or find a chick that knows her body and ask her to give you lessons!
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Anonymous01/23/15
If you really want to improve your writing skills
Ignore all the kiss-ass comments from the easily pleased, room-temperature IQ's that gush praise for this garbage. Get a life, have some sex, actually get a girl naked and LOOK at where you're going, and perhaps ask her where her G-spot is, because you sure as fuck don't know. If you're a female (doubtful, but the possibility exists), get a small mirror and fucking LOOK what's going-on down there, and remember this for future reference; the hymen isn't 'inside' anywhere; it's a membrane across the vaginal entrance, not somewhere up inside it (google it if you don't believe me); and most girls, by their early teens, have ruptured it anyway doing normal, ordinary things like running, walking, or using tampons. Any woman who bleeds from an obstruction 'half-way inside' her vaginal canal has got more serious medical problems than busting her cherry. No stars, this story sucked ass.
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Anonymous12/12/15
"Krissie and daddy"
Kind of good, but you are virgin, write more to hone in on skills, Krissie, and daddy have some babies,
Krissie invites her cousins over to play with daddy
Krissie cousins have daddy's babies also
Krissie and her school friends fuck daddy
Krissie's daddy gets the school pregnant
Krissie's daddy has 100 babies
Krissie's daddy fucks his baby girls when they becum ripe
English
A great story
I'm looking forward to the next chapter. Especially since daddy says he is "not willing to share his baby girl, YET."
awesome
Love the story
GOOD STORY
Loved the story. Could be improved with one more proofread.
Great start
Looking forward to reading more. Apparently Daddy isn't ready to share her... Yet ;)
Can't wait to read about that!
A Good Story
A good, cock stroking, story. Can't wait to see her shared, with her mother?
Interesting story
Many young woman are enticed by well endowed Dad. Other guys just don't measure up to ideal.
The story was reeeally rushed! ....and was this story written by a virgin? The hymen is outside at the entrance, not buried half way in...and you can't hit the G spot fucking doggie style, the dick is curved the wrong way! Its kind of a bitch trying to hit it with your dick anyway... Now if shes on her back with her ass on the edge of the bed (or kitchen table;) and the guy is standing, sngling his thrusts like he's trying to poke her bellybutton from the inside out, you get the general direction...
@Mike2501, I agree 100%
This was obviously written by a guy trying to write in Opposite Sex voice who a) never did Biology 101, or paid any attention if he did, and b) was too fucking lazy to do some basic research, choosing instead to ape the ignorance of half the other male (and quite a few female) writers on this site and in this category. It's omissions like this, easily checked stuff, that shows just how rushed this 'story' really is. I can't give this more than three stars, the intent was there, but the effort is sorely lacking.
@mike2501
Unfortunately, my story probably seems rushed as it was my first ever submission, and I hadn't written anything in a long time. And actually, guys have hit my G Spot during Doggie Style so... clearly you're doing something wrong :)
And in reply to the anonymous person who commented after mike2501: I can't even take you seriously as you start with "This was obviously written by a guy..." because no, I am a female. At least you're right about me never studying Biology, and I probably fucked up the hymen part because mine was already broken before I lost my virginity so, meh, I wouldn't know and I really didn't care. Cut me some slack. Constructive feedback is always good but you didn't have to be a sarcastic prick.
Thanks for reading :)
Needs
I for one can forgive the references to human anatomy. The story was well told and hot as heck, stroked my own member as long as I could before joining in her second climax. For me it was just what I needed to read at the moment.
Love It !!
Please don't let the ignorant comments discourage you. I enjoyed the story. Yes, a bit rushed but hot. Has me VERY wet right now, imagining myself as daddy's girl, so I say "a job well done! ". Especially for your first ever submission! And.men have absolutely hit my g spot during doggy style. A man just needs to learn how to move into a woman to give her maximal pleasure. I hope you write more daddy/daughter stories. Definitely my most visited fantasy.
fuck
the writer is a fucking Virgin,before you write another story go out .
gave it a 5
great story
I agree, writer is either a total virgin or an idiot, or both. Even if you've never fucked a virgin it doesn't take thirty seconds on google to find pictures and descriptions that tell and show you the hymen is up front, not a few inches in, not half way in, ugh!
...then theres the G-spot, which you've apparently never bothered to find on a girl. You can't fuck a girl doggie style and hit the G-spot, hell its difficult as fuck to hit it with your dick anyway without getting at an angle that would drag your dick on the bottom of the outer lips, usually irritating them because they won't have enough lubrication on them. Thats why its either fingers or a shaped toy. The spots on the front side of her body, not the back. A curved dick isnt anywhere near it fucking doggie and not curved enough fucking missionary.
Go back to school or find a chick that knows her body and ask her to give you lessons!
If you really want to improve your writing skills
Ignore all the kiss-ass comments from the easily pleased, room-temperature IQ's that gush praise for this garbage. Get a life, have some sex, actually get a girl naked and LOOK at where you're going, and perhaps ask her where her G-spot is, because you sure as fuck don't know. If you're a female (doubtful, but the possibility exists), get a small mirror and fucking LOOK what's going-on down there, and remember this for future reference; the hymen isn't 'inside' anywhere; it's a membrane across the vaginal entrance, not somewhere up inside it (google it if you don't believe me); and most girls, by their early teens, have ruptured it anyway doing normal, ordinary things like running, walking, or using tampons. Any woman who bleeds from an obstruction 'half-way inside' her vaginal canal has got more serious medical problems than busting her cherry. No stars, this story sucked ass.
"Krissie and daddy"
Kind of good, but you are virgin, write more to hone in on skills, Krissie, and daddy have some babies,
Krissie invites her cousins over to play with daddy
Krissie cousins have daddy's babies also
Krissie and her school friends fuck daddy
Krissie's daddy gets the school pregnant
Krissie's daddy has 100 babies
Krissie's daddy fucks his baby girls when they becum ripe
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