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A Fantasy Cums True Ch. 01

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by Anonymous

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by OtakuReader05/07/14

Great story

Please continue

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by bigdnc1305/08/14

Good Start!!

Let's see where you take us...and the characters.

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by thecarolinadreamer05/08/14

OK

YOU HAVE A GOOD STORY BUT I JUST COULDN'T GET INTO THE BAD ASS CHARACTER. I THINK IT MORE LIKELY THEM, WIFE WOULD HAVE BEEN NEEDING TENDER TREATMENT, EVEN IF FOR ONLY ONE NIGHT.

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by JLCC01/26/15

Not quite a 5, better than a 4

Contrary to the one comment, the woman's response is entirely plausible.

Elegant sluts are a wonder to behold.

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by anubelore02/25/15

pregnant while lactating,

soon after giving birth? Possible? Sure. Probable? Hell no, I'm afraid. Maybe with multiple encounters, but the first one wouldn't do it. Other than that nail-meet-chalkboard bit, it was a very steamy story. Nice use of adverbs and adjectives.
-Anubelore :)

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by TSreader06/04/16

Yummy!

So good....

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