YOU HAVE A GOOD STORY BUT I JUST COULDN'T GET INTO THE BAD ASS CHARACTER. I THINK IT MORE LIKELY THEM, WIFE WOULD HAVE BEEN NEEDING TENDER TREATMENT, EVEN IF FOR ONLY ONE NIGHT.
soon after giving birth? Possible? Sure. Probable? Hell no, I'm afraid. Maybe with multiple encounters, but the first one wouldn't do it. Other than that nail-meet-chalkboard bit, it was a very steamy story. Nice use of adverbs and adjectives.
-Anubelore :)
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Great story
Please continue
Good Start!!
Let's see where you take us...and the characters.
OK
YOU HAVE A GOOD STORY BUT I JUST COULDN'T GET INTO THE BAD ASS CHARACTER. I THINK IT MORE LIKELY THEM, WIFE WOULD HAVE BEEN NEEDING TENDER TREATMENT, EVEN IF FOR ONLY ONE NIGHT.
Not quite a 5, better than a 4
Contrary to the one comment, the woman's response is entirely plausible.
Elegant sluts are a wonder to behold.
pregnant while lactating,
soon after giving birth? Possible? Sure. Probable? Hell no, I'm afraid. Maybe with multiple encounters, but the first one wouldn't do it. Other than that nail-meet-chalkboard bit, it was a very steamy story. Nice use of adverbs and adjectives.
-Anubelore :)
Yummy!
So good....
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