Punishment

Awesome post

This story is so awesome that I will masturbate for ours just reading it.

Romantic yet hardcore! Wow!

Really enjoyed that, wonder what tomorrow will bring?

Calmness in the command of someone else

"I kept my eyes down; knowing that nothing I could say would change his beliefs. Besides, what he said was true, I do like to be looked at, I do like to be taken and used like a toy, and I do like to please... but only him."

I like this line--it shows how she has resigned herself to her fate. There is clarity in simplicity--knowing someone else is in command. When a woman thinks she's in trouble she exudes vulnerability, and that is sexy. It arouses men to exploit, to take advantage. And then later in the story, how he unloads his "fuel" in her and ignites her own fire, making her even more vulnerable and suggestable to the next night's activities--for now it lives inside of her.

Very Nice

I loved this. This is a reason I wanted you to be my editor. Can't wait to hear more from you.

findingmyvoice,

Great writing - a beautiful, sensually graphic scene with vivid imagery and delicious phrasing.

"...pinching my nipples into knots of fire." Terrific line.

Thank you all for the beautiful comments and lovely feedback! I am very appreciative for all who took the time to read this vignette--it truly means the world to me -