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Nobody's Perfect

byMagnetron©
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by Anonymous

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by twelveoone05/06/14

this is a great song

one of the "poems", i hear music to, everything is so toss-away
5ed

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by Tsotha05/06/14

"Nobody is perfect — that's me"

Your poems often leave me smiling by the end, Magnetron. This is one of them.

Some typos: "Nevever mind what it was ", "Camoflauged", "Mising"... but then I suspect those were intentional, due to "nevermind what it was that I wrote".

In support of your popularity contest theory, I'm giving you a 5.

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by Magnetron05/06/14

No, those were actual typos. LOL That's what happens when you dig up something old and submit it without first proofing the ENTIRE thing.

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by Cleardaynow05/07/14

Very pleasing and enjoyable

I found this very pleasing and enjoyable.

The gradual transition from self pity to megalomania was convincing and it was very nice how it turned on ‘nobody’s perfect’.

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