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this is a great song
one of the "poems", i hear music to, everything is so toss-away
5ed
"Nobody is perfect — that's me"
Your poems often leave me smiling by the end, Magnetron. This is one of them.
Some typos: "Nevever mind what it was ", "Camoflauged", "Mising"... but then I suspect those were intentional, due to "nevermind what it was that I wrote".
In support of your popularity contest theory, I'm giving you a 5.
No, those were actual typos. LOL That's what happens when you dig up something old and submit it without first proofing the ENTIRE thing.
Very pleasing and enjoyable
I found this very pleasing and enjoyable.
The gradual transition from self pity to megalomania was convincing and it was very nice how it turned on ‘nobody’s perfect’.
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