Thank you so much for the positive feedback! This is the tip of the iceberg, I have chapters 2-4 on deck. Suggestions are always welcome, the later chapters in this series are still in progress.
The writing was great. Fun storyline. Very erotic. I'm also curious to see what happens between Katrin and Felicia. That looks like an interesting storyline to come.
Great job!
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Anonymous08/03/14
Part 2
I need it! Really interesting story line and I like the dynamic between Malena and Katrin. Their demonstration for Peter proved to be humourous and down right hot. Can't wait to see BJ Bliss flourish!
English
Absolutely brilliant!
Brilliant premise, brilliantly execution, brilliant plot, brilliantly written...just plain brilliant! Five stars, easily.
Great concept, great writing
I love the idea, the execution, the style... you have a winner here! Hope it goes on for many chapters.
Thanks!
Thank you so much for the positive feedback! This is the tip of the iceberg, I have chapters 2-4 on deck. Suggestions are always welcome, the later chapters in this series are still in progress.
Loved it
The writing was great. Fun storyline. Very erotic. I'm also curious to see what happens between Katrin and Felicia. That looks like an interesting storyline to come.
Great job!
Part 2
I need it! Really interesting story line and I like the dynamic between Malena and Katrin. Their demonstration for Peter proved to be humourous and down right hot. Can't wait to see BJ Bliss flourish!
so good
Very nicely done. Enjoyed it immensely. Need to step up my own writing. Looking forward to Chap 2.
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