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by Anonymous

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by pelegrino05/07/14

Interesting polemic!
Are you talking about any particular denomination (Catholic only?) or about all credos in general?
They are all at it, you know, and you find me in agreement. I would probably be more harsh if I was to write a poem like this. Well done.

5ed.

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by twelveoone05/07/14

a little too

polemic
a little too pat
didn't vote here

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by tazz31705/07/14

WITH ALL THOSE DIATRIBES

this is a perfect order to use girls as Altar Girls and the boys as ushers, TK U MLJ LV NV

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by UnderYourSpell05/08/14

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Well you said it as you felt it there! Although I think the lines 'Condemning the behavior of lesbians and gays' and 'Because those dirty rotten bums refuse
To admit they're queer' clash. In the first you are treating gays with respect but in the second line you are condemning with the very unPC word 'queer'.
Thanks for the read

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by Magnetron05/08/14

I blame a rogue alter ego for this one.

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