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Smooth Jazz Ch. 08 Pt. 02

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by ariesgirl05/08/14

Another instance where I want to smack Jazz. She is being a bit selfish. Connor has feelings just like she does. The things he do for her but yet she kicks him to the curb like he is in the wrong.

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Jazz makes my teeth i my left eye twitch!! She doesn't deserve his love but that baby deserves to know his father. Jazz annoys me!! Connor was right about everything he said to her. Can't stand her!!

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by chocolatesista05/09/14

its okay. love you

Its just more to read I say, bring it on home girl. Good luck on your finals.

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by Naturalgurl05/11/14

two sides

You got the feelings right for both Jazz and Conner. Being unmarried and involved with a military man who might be called to duty is frightening. Being with a woman who can't seem to see you for yourself and not judge you by the actions of the past men in her life can be frustrating. Spot on Dlovely, Spot on!!

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by swear_toobob06/14/14

I don't like her

She makes me have my "bitch really" face she knows she's dead wrong and refuses to make the right choice but he would be wrong if he left her ass. She's being extremely selfish not considering her baby or Connar's Dilemma

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by fluer07/06/14

You got skills. This story so addictive. I can't stop reading. It's like crack for the mind.

Pennington needs to make his move now. Ellen is unstable.William needs to take back his manhood. Boy is he pathetic. He left Jazz and his life has gone down the tubes. If he weren't such a bastard I'd actually feel sorry for him. In twisted way I am kind of enjoying his down fall. To bad Connor and Jazz aren't aware of his little melt down. And as for our little rapist... I l see a very painful ending for him. Connor ain't going to let anything happen to his woman.

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