I Told You So Ch. 16

You broke my heart with this story

And now it is not so broken with Chels and Joe living happily ever after.
Thankyou for such an AWESOME story.
It was such a great story - most definitely one of my all time faves.

This was....

such an amazing story. I know I've said it before, several times actually :), but it had all the parts that make a story wonderful. You made me care about the characters, laugh and cry with them. Add in the hot sex and it hit the perfect category. Don't need to know what you've decided to write next, I only know I will be reading it. Pat yourself on the back with both hands for a great debut.

And thank you for the reason for Bens death :-D

Well wrtten story

I hope that I learn to write this well someday. Well told story, ended just right.

Predictable

Kill Ben and Joe wins-Why don't you cripple Joe with erectile dysfunction and a different outcome would be better.

So if you followed the lead of your characters......

It must have been Joe that requested Ben die :-)

Just kidding! Well written and an unusual plot. 5*

I'm just starting your next story!

Amazing

Read this from the beginning and I have loved every chapter.

Wonderful story

Thank you for sharing this story, I loved it. I've read the whole thing, waiting rather impatiently for each installment! Please keep writing!

Such an amazing story

Amazing! I went through all kinds of emotions. Was always waiting for the next chapter.

Boring

1*

Great!

You are a writer. Keep doing it!

I have never before swung so quickly from adoration to rage

I discovered this fic just a few days ago & propelled through ot at a record pace. It was hot, sweet, polyamorous, and well-written and I think showed the transition from misgivings to joyous polyamory in an honest and compassionate way. So when you had Chelsea unilaterally throw out over three years of a functional and loving relationship because of some misguided sense of tradition I nearly threw my
IPod against the wall. It was such a shitty, cruel thing to do & I couldn't understand how she could make that choice after 3 years. Killing Ben off didn't bother me nearly as much as throwing Joe out when Chelsea got pregnant. And yeah I read the whole story anyway because you ARE a good writer. But I'm still pissed.

Frustated

This story is really well written, but I'm soooo disapointed with it. I can't belive she would end their triad because she got pregnant! That was horrible, insensitive, and lame. She seriously couldn't see beyond the traditional expectations of society? Ugh.
Still marking this as a favorite due to the smoking hot sex scenes, but wishing the author hadn't felt the need to kill off one boyfriend so she could eventually be with the other.

I'm not pissed

Yes, I am sorry Ben died, but it allowed the story to be completed your way. It was an interesting premise, that of polyandry. Our society has trouble with that and I could see why Chelsea had to do what she did.

The sex was great, intimate, erotic and loving. The characters were truly in love with each other. While unusual, Ben's and Joe's parents could see that they loved each other and accepted them all.

Great story, characters and very erotic.

And thanks for having the whole story ready to go before posting the chapters. All too many authors here have posted chapters as they wrote them, and, for whatever reason, never finished what were good stories. You do not leave us in the lurch. We can expect to see an end to yours.

Keep writing. I've enjoyed all of yours that I've read.

Thanks!

The poly lovers are pissed.

I'm not.

The poly shit leaves 1* the only scoring option.

I previously commented on one of your other chapters about how I felt Joe was a better match for Chelsea, though I certainly never thought this was going to be the end result. Regardless, you weave entrancing stories and I am terribly frustrated that I have now read all of your posted work.

Once again

I agree with DeadPoetSparrow. Completely unexpected but not surprised in a way. You crafted the story together so that she got both of them in the end. Beautiful. You made me cry. I'm also a bit annoyed with the fact that I have read everything you have posted. Asking whether you were a girl/guy seems so stupid now if I had read this story first. I had started to write a romance novel and I want to begin writing again. Beautiful. This is a true story of love. "Meant to be/falling in love with you and me" -Jonas Brothers (Yes, them). The following song seems so synchronized with your story:
"If I got down on my knees and told you I was yours forever
Would you get down on yours too and take my hand
Would we get that old time feeling
Would we laugh and talk for hours
The way we did when our love first began
Would you tell me that you've missed me too
And that you've been so lonely
And you've waited for the day that I returned
And we'd live and love forever
And that I'm your one and only"
-Carrie Underwood
You are a wonderful, superb, excellent writer who creates dynamic characters and storylines with eloquent style. An infinity stars to you. 5 is not enough.

I just want to read the whole story again for

Gods what a roller coaster of emotions. And what an ending. You are amazing.

totaly enthralled by the Authors writing. 5*****

being honest , the subject matter & poly genre are not something i would usually read , problem for me with this tale was that it was so well written , i was unable to stop .. wanted to see where the Author took the story .

and i guess that says it all ..
does not seem to matter what subject / genre this Author writes , whatever she writes i find myself hooked.

xxxhugsxxx

TwistedOliver.

I'M DEAD

WHY YOU DO DIS
I MEAN
I CAN'T
I CAN'T EVEN RIGHT NOW
I love stories like these
The romance
The sexual tension
The erotica
The happy ending with a twist
I LOVE YOUR WRITING YOU ARE ABSOLUTELY BRILLIANT
At first I was like "a threesome? Eh... I'm not into that"
BUT THEN YOU INCORPORATED LOVE AND HAPPINESS IN ALL DIRECTIONS AND I WAS SO HAPPY

Thanks

You got game girl!

You have such a way with words..,

I hope you write another story again soon!

Thank you thank you!!!
I know where the frustrations and rage of some of the commenters is coming from, but I love where this story went. I loved every part of it. I'm not really into threesomes, I am a sucker for the normal traditional romance stories. But I didn't regret reading this story. The track yourstory ventured was completely understandable and it feels natural especially to people unaccustomed to these kind of relationships at the first place. I see nothing wrong with thw decisions each character made especially Chelsea.


Wonderful story!!!! Thank you!