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Jax Brightsteel: Sword for Hire Ch. 02

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous05/09/14

Nice

Enjoy your work. It would be pretty cool if u could write longer chapters though

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by Anonymous05/10/14

way too short

The first two chapters? could have been combined.

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by Hurbster05/13/14

Good but the chapters are far too short.

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