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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous05/09/14

too drawn out

I lost interest fast and i love seduction

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by Anonymous05/09/14

Loved it. Really well written.

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by Rosie_3005/10/14

Wow!!

Brilliant and Hot!!! Great writing.

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by visioneer05/10/14

Terrific job with the tease. Smoking hot and sexy.

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by Bahama05/10/14

Awesome

That was truly intense. I was kinda wishin that was me ;)

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by Loverboikeke05/10/14

sexy as hell!!

This is a sexy teasing dominance and prey/predator story. I love it! Had me wanting that strip tease for me.

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by sandymonroe05/10/14

There was nice tension among the characters and the sex was hot. good work!

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by FiveWolves05/14/14

Hot!

Fucking hot Laylonnie!

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