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Excellent
This is an excellent representation of the rationalizations an abused partner uses to justify staying in the relationship. In short, she's more afraid of being alone than she is of the abuse. It's a tragic situation, but this shows the mental gymnastics the poor woman is going through.
Thank you... and I hope this isn't, never has been, and never will be you.
There is an ending, which one will it be?
Okay you love him, and you don't love yourself. One rationalization of many in an abusive relationship, females and some males are more afraid of being alone than being hurt or dead. Been there, done that and somehow escaped but it did mean I had to make them fear me, not a great thing to have to do. Try writing a conclusion for there are three outcomes for your character, two are real and one is a pipe dream:
1. Found dead at home or maybe slain on the street or in the mall - gun, knife, fists - take your pick (Very real); or
2. You begin to like yourself and you move away, new attitude, new location, new life; but he is always there in the background as a threat to you and those around you and little hope of legal and judicial support (Real); or
3. The courts and police give you a secure new identity and a new country to live in while he is forever a Registered Partner Abuser, his equivalent is a Registered Sex Offender (Dreamtime)
Good for its intent.
Tale of a sorry relationship.
Creating conflict
The story instantly generates internal conflict between sympathy and antipathy. A very good work of writing.
bobby9909
I totally agree with you and also hope the character she writes about isn't her & never will be. However, her stories are too close to reality for the character to not be her or someone very close to her.
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