... for this introduction to your excellent work, I look forward avidly to finding out what happens in Part 2! Very well done - five stars, and don't keep us waiting too long for the next chapter!
Can't wait to read what happens to you next. I am hoping this is a real situation. I want more.
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Anonymous05/16/14
Why stop?
Why do you write, "Mercifully, you stop"?
A woman of such intense sexuality and luxurious eroticism should never, ever want it to stop.
You understand how women think - much better than even many other women ourselves.
Please, you MUST write the sequel - soon!
Alyson G
Thank you all again for your comments! Part 2 has been submitted. And the full story has also been submitted with illustrations as well. Hopefully that will be up soon under the illustrated section of the site.
@Anonymous - she's happy that he stops because she is afraid if he continues, she will break the rules :)
@sexxyvixen - perhaps the illustrations will add to the sensation of reality :P
English
Welcome, subminx, and thank you ...
... for this introduction to your excellent work, I look forward avidly to finding out what happens in Part 2! Very well done - five stars, and don't keep us waiting too long for the next chapter!
Excellent! Hot and compact! Please go ahead!
Thank you
Thank you for the feedback and support! I look forward to posting another chapter soon :)
Good read
Can't wait to read what happens to you next. I am hoping this is a real situation. I want more.
Why stop?
Why do you write, "Mercifully, you stop"?
A woman of such intense sexuality and luxurious eroticism should never, ever want it to stop.
You understand how women think - much better than even many other women ourselves.
Please, you MUST write the sequel - soon!
Alyson G
Part 2
Thank you all again for your comments! Part 2 has been submitted. And the full story has also been submitted with illustrations as well. Hopefully that will be up soon under the illustrated section of the site.
@Anonymous - she's happy that he stops because she is afraid if he continues, she will break the rules :)
@sexxyvixen - perhaps the illustrations will add to the sensation of reality :P
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