Alice Ch. 08

Awesome end to an awesome story!

This is perfect story...told as a tale should be...woven with some class...sensual...loved it!

Anguish

There was a 99.99 percent chance that Charlie was going to get into Alice's panties, but I didn't expect it to end the way it did.

Thanks for the great ride. It was a first for Charlie, and it brought back happy memories of my first--the true joy of sex.

Wonderfully told

That was about the most touching, yet sensual, story I've read on here. The end was a real twist over what I expected, turning the tables completely. It was both hot and gentle, a real triumph of story telling. In the end, I felt very sorry for Alice.
I read all 8 chapters one after the other, one of only a few story's I've not been able put down, you have real talent for writing.
Do please, write more stories along these lines?
Thanks !

What the hell? I'm mean very good story but what the hell is with the ending? Truly sad to see such a blossoming love story end because of society stupidity. Plus they were just steps nothing illegal there. There respective parents would have understood, they had only been steps for a couple years. Man, wanted the happy ending i'm just flabbergasted after all that reading it ended with heartbreak.