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Drone Strike

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by Anonymous

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by twelveoone05/11/14

Hi there...

consider this, the goal, the goal reached
however not much of a goal
and almost expected conclusion
5ed
nice tight title, and droned to the end

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by Magnetron05/12/14

@ Twelveoone

Now this .... THIS is a fucking priceless title. I didn't have one when the poem was finished. And this just popped into my head ..... along with 'Spelling Bees' which totally sucked.

Is it about a drone worker striking from the factory?
Is it about striking a fellow worker who drones on and on??
Is it about striking at something long distance like a drone???

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