F4: Life in Suspension

5 STARZ

Not my cuppa tea but well-written with few flaws. Could be tighter. Few flaws wins the day.

This is great. Wish I could be more specific. Alexus was a well-drawn character and I really felt for her. Loved BethAnn too.

Well done

Excellent job of pulling such a full range of emotions from the pages and making them come alive.

I am not a fan of first person stories or the theme but this was very emotive and I found myself enjoying it for that fact, well done combining several songs together, I could at least place three of them easily. Good job.

I liked this one because

It went back before the part of the story detailed in the song. The main character broke my heart. Good story.

Loved it

Not much to say other than that - well-drawn, believable characters, nice story arc, loved it coming back full circle.

beautifully drawn. really good use of the song(s).

Story by a word smith

I have been an avid reader all my life which is now into its second bi-centenial. Of all that I've read, regardless of subject matter, I've never read anything more well written. You have a gift, and I could easily imagine you earning a very profitable, even wealthy, living from writing. Live long, prosper and many thanks for the story. Well done!

Two tissues

Sniff sniff. That was lovely, boo hoo hoo! ;)