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I really enjoyed this, good use of the lyrics within the story, Good luck in the challenge.
Sweet, and nice to have a happy ending. :)
a quickie
It moved quickly along, like a train down the tracks. Sweet. Nice use of the lyrics! I do have a question: Why does he never refer to his cock as "my cock" always "a cock" or "the cock"? I'm so curious!
Nice illustration of the song.
Literal, but from a different POV.
Classic Black and White Romantic
Awww, that was so classic. What a lovely romance - and hot sex too! Thank you for that one. I love trains ;)
Some good background in here, it's not just a slushy. The details about Roslyn's age and how she was filmed, that the sex wasn't faithful sex with Ellen (but he clearly wasn't going to spoil things by telling her, sensible man). That bit where he fondled Roslyn's very expensive tits was great.
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