He's got trouble coming! Good story though. Needs a little editing...
Great start
Great start, great story, really looking forward to Pt. 2, and hoping for much more.
Part 02 is now complete. Check it out. Thanks for all the positive feedback on this one!
Cuz it reminds me of a similar event from my life! HOT STORY!! Now on to chapter 2.
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Poor dude
He's got trouble coming! Good story though. Needs a little editing...
Please continue
Great start
Excellent
Great start, great story, really looking forward to Pt. 2, and hoping for much more.
Part 02 Is Done
Part 02 is now complete. Check it out. Thanks for all the positive feedback on this one!
Loved the story ...
Cuz it reminds me of a similar event from my life!
HOT STORY!!
Now on to chapter 2.
Click here to leave your own comment on this submission! or
Back to Office Affairs Pt. 01 or
More submissions by SteelDrive.