Mom's Nude Portraits

erase the security tapes? posing for her friend as a couple?wont mind the credit if you use my ideas(hint hint)

well written

thanks for writing such an erotic (and warm) story. Hard to meld love and sex together.

I was hesitant at reafing this story at first because I didnt know how much I would like the role reversal. I was surprised when I liked it. You write with a lot of passion but I did think when it came time for them to have sex it was extremely dry and weak. I thought they should have succumbed to their sexual desire but instead the son asked the mom if he could fuck her. I thought it was pretty clear from the story that she wanted him too. He should have just done it, no asking.

Also

Aloso you have cut scenes during the sex, I hate cut scenes but have never seen them in a story on here. For example I didnt even see where she took off her clothes, granted she probably did somewhere and he asked her if he could go a little further (I also hate this part of the story) and doesnt explain what he means by that. She just gets down in doggy. I think that could mean a lot of things from a boob job, making out, ect... That did not have to mean all the way

I rate this story a 3 cause I did like it but when it came to the sex the guy was overly submissive whichI thought was a poor write job

Thanks for the read (3 stars is one of the highest grades I've given on here cause I think there are only 1 or 2 people who can write on this site, something you should feel proud of)

All that is left is for the Art Director

to meet with his mom and thank her for the tape has from the security system.

Wonderful story

Very well written, and very imaginative.

I loved it and ....

I am not a fan of sequels/additions/chapters to stories on Literotica but for some reason I would like to read your take on their life after the art gallery.

Also some of these other comments: I don't get them. 5 stars and won't take off for the error on page 1.

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Maybe in Part 2, Mommy can incorporate some of Sonny Boy's cock juice in her paintings! When Sonny starts painting, he can put some of Mommy's pussy juice in his paintings!

MORE MORE !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

This could be a long run, I hope it is. Easy to read and very well written, Thanks for a GREAT read.

Very interesting

You wrote "An hour passed, and my erection slowly began to fade." That's not realistic at all but other than that, the story is very erotic. Keep it up

please give us more! Give us a chapter that has her fucking her boy in their bed at home

and then in the living rom and the art room and everywhere you can think of. Give her the sex they both need. Let her become his mate

more

more

Please provide the next chapter..

Great story. Can you provide the next chapter of the story . It will be great..thanks

Excellent start!

Thoroughly enjoyed this story. Hope there is more to come. Well paced and well written. Keep it up. LOL

Daytymer

Artistic talents utilised, via a nearly perfect 'CFNM' scenario. Voted a 5!

Brilliant writing, from an imaginative older female.

I love seeing new stories listed by HeyAll as I know they'll usually make my day. This was no different. The story was very well written and the buildup to the sex was perfect. Hopefully they'll be a second, hotter chapter that has the two artist moms painting both of sons together. The resulting combinations could be very sexy. Just a thought.

so many options

it could be a fun series. they have so much to learn about each other. to that point, we know almost nothing about them too.

A really hot story

There's a lot more to this story that could be told, and I hope that the author will continue this storyline.

Thanks for the read.

Felt like it was missing something.

I gave this story a four because I felt like it came up short of some of your earlier stories that I have read. I cannot place my finger on what, exactly, but it just felt as if something was missing.

Sexy Story****

Hot story could stand alone or be a great start. Either way thanks for sharing.

Killer, closing, irreverent last sentence !

Everything had been so polite, careful and proper with mom and son in spite of their libertine, carnal actions but that last bit of ' mess ' emerging unexpectedly was the perfect contrast..

excellent

great story and premise. how do you keep doing this? thank you.

nice hot story

Having done some life drawing (as the artist not the model) the erotic potential is always there. The added spice of the raunchy mother in this story is a nice touch - nice writing.

Loved it

As usual I loved reading another one of your stories. Very good read.

Finished too fast

You spent a significant amount of time on context and additional information, but then moved through the sex parts too quickly. I'd like to see the story develop more and for you to be patient while writing about sex. Also, fantasy has to be believe able. There was too much at stake for this sophisticated women to risk it all by having sex in the main gallery. It would be more appropriate and believe able if they had sex in the office. And also, don't be in such a rush to stop writing. This could be a really good story.

Perfect

This story feels and reads as close to reality as life itself. You are one of the best writers of incest stories that I have ever read.

I have been writing, dreaming and reading incest stories since I was very young. I appreciate a great story and your stories qualify in my book as #1's.

Really Enjoyed the Story

Nice build up to a glorious ending!

and when they got home???

You have to continue this story. Tell us what happened later on and the following day! How many times did the son's cum run down her leg or down over her ass on to the bed?

The Punch Line

Very erotic, very intense, then, POW! The last sentence caused me to burst out laughing ... excellent!!

Great story

Great story. I enjoyed it very much.

Great Story

Do you think you'll continue with this story?
I hope that you do.

There Should Be A Followup.

This was an excellent introduction to the theme. The mother's mention of interesting developments when another artist painted the other artist's son should guide the next installment.

More chapters

This an excellent story which ended far too soon . I also agree that this mother and son should also continue similar to the other artist and her son . This story could be an introduction to a great story of mother and son love .

Oh boy...

That could have been dicey. At least the gallery owner, after watching her artist fuck her assistant, had come in only to find out the assistant was actually the artist's son, had fled to her office to finger herself to oblivion. As it turned out it was the best orgasm she had given herself in years. After the opening, she invited her artist and her son, to join her and her son, for dinner at her home the next night. Nothing too heavy, just something light so that they wouldn't feel to lethargic after dinner. Maybe do a little dancing... yeah dancing... that's the ticket.