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The Apple Tree Ch. 01

byNigel Debonnaire©
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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous05/11/14

it is not junk

The piece is unfinished. it needs more text, but it is not junk.

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by Shadowreader705/12/14

Not bad

A good start if a little short looking forward to more chapters

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by Shadowreader705/12/14

Not bad

A good start if a little short looking forward to more chapters

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by Anonymous05/12/14

intriguing beginning

Delightful start - looking forward to further chapters

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by Sid060405/12/14

Thank you...

I enjoyed reading chapter 1 and I'm looking forward to reading what follows. Thank you for sharing.

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