It's just, well umm; ewwwwwwww. The story was plenty raunchy and all that. I had to stop when Rita encouraged the dad to cum. Probably a nightmare I've had somewhere along the way. Things went very quickly and the dialogue was good enough. Just not my kind of story, sorry.
RS
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Anonymous05/15/14
Fun to read, but a bit awkward
It was a fun story but it doesn't quite ring true (despite the claim that it is). The dialogue is a little awkward and unrealistic. There is an inconsistency between the claim of the main character's "innocence" and disinterest in sex and the behaviour he exhibits. Particularly when he is calling his family "filthy" and at the same time licking his sister's dirty panties. Perhaps a smoother transition from a state of innocence and naïveté to gradual acceptance and then enjoyment would have been better. It may not be the way it happened (assuming it is a true story), but it makes for better reading. Definitely keep writing!
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Anonymous05/15/14
No
The fact that your girlfriend fucks your dad regularly is too unrealistic.
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Anonymous05/16/14
Great story probably true in parts
My sister and l had been playing around with each other for about 6 months since her 18th birthday.l am 1 year older than her.Although we had never had intercourse we had wanked each other to climax.One evening we had been for a walk and were feeling quite horny, when we entered the house to find our parents fucking on the settee. We were quite shocked but excited to watch. Dad and Mum invited us to stay and watch them. It was very exciting and then we were invited to join in.
Life changed for all four of us .... If you want more ask Ken
I can't imagine a hotter story! I want more! Please say there will be more coming just like this! I hope the ring will grow and even a future marriage with even more loving family!
English
GOOD STORY
IT'S SHORT, TO THE POINT, AND VERY SEXY. I DO WONDER ABOUT THE CLAIM OF NON-FICTION.
Excellant but would have liked more sex. I hope more chapters are planned
Excellant story but there has to be more chapters
I didn't like it
It's just, well umm; ewwwwwwww. The story was plenty raunchy and all that. I had to stop when Rita encouraged the dad to cum. Probably a nightmare I've had somewhere along the way. Things went very quickly and the dialogue was good enough. Just not my kind of story, sorry.
RS
Fun to read, but a bit awkward
It was a fun story but it doesn't quite ring true (despite the claim that it is). The dialogue is a little awkward and unrealistic. There is an inconsistency between the claim of the main character's "innocence" and disinterest in sex and the behaviour he exhibits. Particularly when he is calling his family "filthy" and at the same time licking his sister's dirty panties. Perhaps a smoother transition from a state of innocence and naïveté to gradual acceptance and then enjoyment would have been better. It may not be the way it happened (assuming it is a true story), but it makes for better reading. Definitely keep writing!
No
The fact that your girlfriend fucks your dad regularly is too unrealistic.
Great story probably true in parts
My sister and l had been playing around with each other for about 6 months since her 18th birthday.l am 1 year older than her.Although we had never had intercourse we had wanked each other to climax.One evening we had been for a walk and were feeling quite horny, when we entered the house to find our parents fucking on the settee. We were quite shocked but excited to watch. Dad and Mum invited us to stay and watch them. It was very exciting and then we were invited to join in.
Life changed for all four of us .... If you want more ask Ken
Very interesting previous comment
Ken, is it? I'm sure we all enjoyed your comment and would like to hear more!
Excellent
Pelase keep up the good work!!! 5 Stars
Wow!
I can't imagine a hotter story! I want more! Please say there will be more coming just like this! I hope the ring will grow and even a future marriage with even more loving family!
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