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awesome
please write more. i just came harder than v
Good Deal!
This was a strong start to a great story, but, haters got to hate! Please go on with it looking forward to where you take it. Hope there is a lot of ruined marriages and black bread women in your tales future! Can't wait.
Not a Bad Start
Not bad, now expand more and give us a feel for the story. I'm a total submissive and it takes more time for her to fall that far that fast so you need to build us a better time line it needs to be like get sex not a fast fuck make me wet then wetter then wetter then blow my mind. OK keep going show us what you got.
Very good start!
Please ad an New Chapter soon. This was a very good start, and we would love to read more.
Not bad
It was pretty good, but a little too short to get me anywhere. Ignore the douche nozzles that are slamming it, you've got talent.
Great start. Love the idea and concept. Chapters needs to be a little bit longer, and just have a tad bit more detail. Other than that you are onto a great start. I love the idea and can't wait to hear more about the actual fallout (e.i. what about women of other races, celebs). Also the girls getting knocked up is a very hot and great addition.
Fun
I found out your stories just recently and read all of them.
I hope there is more in the future. It's just so much fun to be able to jump into the world you created and see what turn your characters' lives take.
I really enjoyed chapter 4 and the first part of chapter 5 with the whole household. I'd love to see more of the daily life in that time period.
Btw, I don't know if Literotica allows link but I found one picture that would fit perfectly for a BPV illustration:
It's the actress Kelly Brook with her black boyfriend. Now, that's an interracial couple !
http://images.google.fr/imgres?imgurl=http://i.d ailymail.co.uk/i/pix/2014/02/03/article-2550599-1B 2A383900000578-490_634x775.jpg&imgrefurl=http://ww w.dailymail.co.uk/tvshowbiz/article-2550599/Kelly-B rook-enjoys-romantic-holiday-Miami-boyfriend-David-M cIntosh-just-one-month-dating.html&h=775&w=634&tbn id=PAE4IVob8WquUM:&tbnh=120&tbnw=98&docid=qWxWGoy5 Xx0t0M&client=ubuntu&usg=__tjgAlFaIG57h4gR_wWcHEog 9kbM=&sa=X&ved=0ahUKEwi25cvDk4LNAhXGPRoKHSm-DnwQ9Q EIJDAD
Inspiration?
I would love to check out more of your stories. They're awesome. Keep it up.
BBC is truth, BBC is life:
http://www.xvideos.com/video23037417/blacked _first_interracial_for_cheating_gf_kylie_page#_tab Comments
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