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Really enjoyed this so much I read it again, it's outside of what I usually like so thank you for leading me to other pastures!
A real joy
It was a real pleasure to open this – and find that there are more than three words. It’s not that I mind those – I enjoyed them – it’s just that I like these so much more.
Incidentally are you aware that there is a thread for poems with three words or less in the poetry section of the bulletin board?
But I really like these roller coaster word rides. You have a real gift for this – please keep going. This time I actually like the opening line the best. I mean ‘Work on being concise instead of making your hair do that thing’ is just such darned good advice, a sort of ‘go placidly’ for the psychologically challenged.
And there really does seem to be a thread that takes you through and develops as it goes along. I am not saying there actually is – just that it feels that way. Excellent
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