All Comments on 'Lawn Guy'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
no speedo

that was the hardest cum i have had in a long time. my cock is still hard. think i will buy a lawnmower.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
not bad.

I wish I had a lawn boy like that. I liked the plot, but found it a little too plodding. Good job.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
HOT!!!!!!!!

This is without doubt the HOTTEST CFNM story that I have read! LOVED IT! Would like to read more about the time the other women from the swim meet came over and watched his CFNM show!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago

nice story, got me nice and hard

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago

Love this story. It shows that us women can be just as perverted bas men

electric1electric1over 6 years ago

This is a really good story overall. It's hot in how it describes female lust. Great characters. I hope you'll write a sequel some day.

One problem, though, is the paragraph about the women touring the men's shower room. It's not detailed enough to be good porn. It doesn't serve the plot at all, and in fact it distracts from the story while raising questions about the story's plausibility. You should remove that paragraph and then write a sequel about these women's ogling adventures with a fleshed-out shower room scene.

This story even ends with "But that is another story." So I hope you'll write that story for us. You are a serious talent.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Hope there’s another story to this, about more women seeing him! Potentially even a new older woman swim coach who comes up with a new uniform?

BarbloverBarbloverover 1 year ago

Very hot CFNM story. I would really like to learn in detail what her swim group friends went through with Mike when they came home "by chance".

massageguy1massageguy18 months ago

I love it a lot...love seeing her slowly take charge

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