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Another great chapter...
I'm thoroughly enjoying you story so far. It's a shame that the chapters aren't longer but then it's good reading so I'm happy to get what I can. :) Thank you for sharing.
Great Read
Please post more ASAP!
Are you going to continue Gilded in Gold too?
Love your writing style.
Great Chapter 02*****
Hoping the next chapters are just as great, Thanks for sharing.
I'm enjoying this story immensely!!
Though, just a word to the wise, you might want to at least spell check before you submit. Lots of easily rectified spelling errors going on here! It didn't spoil my enjoyment, but if this takes off like I hope it will, then you'll have countless comments about it...
Fiddle dee dee
Let me just say. I love the Gone with the Wind reference. O'Hara and Butler. Fantastic!
I just read the list of the stories you plan on continuing...
...and this is not one of them! Please reconsider - the energy between the characters is great and the story line is intriguing!!!
Please reconsider.
Can I echo what has already been said, please reconsider completing this story. It's such a great beginning and I'd like to see where these two characters will go.
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