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Looking forward to part 2
A fun read
more
I love this theme. Love the white hot fantasy of a pretty lady going home with her panties full of a total strangers cum. I have always LOVED the thought of a woman, a MARRIED woman in particular, being sent home messy and soaked. More please.
Fucking brilliant
I was stiff as a poker as soon as she came off the hockey field. I hope there is a lot more stories to cum. Cant wait.
Horny Man
Very nice
I love the innocence of this story, and lets face it: we all wish we could be in that situation.
Beautifully described and very, very hot.
I'm off to read chapter two now, hopefully it will make me just as aroused.
A Lovely Start
A fantasy almost every man can relate to. Meeting a stranger somewhere quiet but public and letting your desires take over. Well Done Mary. Looking forward to the second part.
Nice and horny. . .
It is so nice to find two agreeable people in a waiting room. I liked how helpful Wendy was helping everything move along.
Looking forward to the next chapter.
Excellent
I thought this story was beautifully done. I there are a lot men who yearn to have a similar fantasy in a waiting room. The idea of the student teacher in a hockey outfit was definately a turn on for a lot of men and I include myself in that. I do hope we have more from the author, in fact, I'd encourage it. Well done!
Thank you for a lovely, sexy story
I always enjoy MaryR's stories and have been a fan for some time. Mary's skills at writing erotic stories have increased over time. The Waiting Room is a little different in style to her earlier stories and is all the better for that. It is very sexy and I got a nice thrill thinking how nice it would be to meet such an accommodating young lady in a Waiting room.
Naughty, but nice.
A well told story, with just enough naughtiness to make it an erotic read.
Can't wait
Can't wait to read part 2. This was a real thrill, Mary, thank you!
Wonderful
Brilliant story, so well written and so naughty.
Masterful story telling
This story captures your imagination immediately by presenting a young fit woman in sweaty hockey kit. It unfolds into an erotic encounter that many of us will have fantasised about. Mary's style of story telling is superb and it is enjoyable and calmly erotic to read.
Lovely as always
Mary.
Thanks for the email hadn't heard from you in ages LOL x x
Loved this start. so sensual yet dirty at the same time..
I've told you have a great style and are a very accomplished writer...bitch! LOL x
Look forward to reading the next part, knicks to one side obviously LOL x x x
Welcome back Mary
Missed you and great story
Love your panties
Great comeback Mary. Keep up the good work and you'll keep a few other things up!
Excellent read
thanks for the mail regarding your new submissions Mary, great story and very erotic. Keep them coming.
Nice, nasty one Mary!
good to see you still writing Mary.
Nice, wet knickers . . . .
Thanks for the notification that your back.
Great story Mary, So happy you took the time to let us know that your writing again.
Sticky Story
Great new story and really worth waiting for. I'm now going to read Ch 2!
What ever next?
Not quite Blake, but a delightful song of innocence and experience nevertheless
I liked it
A nice story, a very erotic chance encounter. Well done.
Well done
Good solid structure, detailed and descriptive as always Mary... Well done!
Outstanding
Wonderful tale. Loved reading it and enjoyed immensely.
spunk for others
Mutual masturbation is always great fun and a turn on even for married or committed couples. It is even a turn on for gays and lesbians.
I have had such fun on trains standing close to a woman who could feel my erection against her ass, and she just pushed back.
She adjusted her skirt and open my fly with one hand. I just hung on we pushed back and forth until I came on her panties, she again put me back in and zipped me up readjusted her skirt and never looked back, but did lick a finger and smile. I rode that train hoping for a repeat. Never happened but the memory of anonymous masturbation is always exciting.
Wow!!
Loved it, Mary. Now on to chapter two!
Beautifully described
It may be a fantasy but it's been done very skilfully, so it actually comes across as rather credible. Well written, nicely paced and not too long - I give it full marks.
Damn, that was great
Another great story by Mary!
I loved it, only at a railway station
in England Could Mary cum up
with such a hot story about a young
woman and an older guy having a
very pleasant time waiting for a train.
Sexy dialogue
I loved the realism of the story. The dialogue between the two was nervous, cautious and hesitant, which made the description of what they were doing all the more erotic. Looking forward to reading part 2 now.
Oh this was wonderful
Thank You Mary and know i will read all of Your work, i hope it will be as exciting. i would love to speak with You
Gym Knickers
What a fantastic story wishing every minute I could be 'John' and hoping that Wendy's knickers were navy blue, my favourite colour. Looking forward to part 2
Realistic
Loved the pure natural real feel to this story . The nervous start the fact that they both had a lot to lose if things weren't as they appeared . Brilliant !!!
Hot encounter!
I love the story of this encounter! It unwinds in a very realistic fashion. I wish that I could be him, shooting my load into her panties and then taking a call from the wife!
Wait till you read this-it's wonderful
This is perfect MaryR. I'm really lost for words. Old England lives again thanks to your wonderful talent.I love the fact that there is never the slightest hint of threat or coercion. This is wonderful thing for a young woman to do when it is safe, it gives a girl such confidence.
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