These are too short. Even though you post regularly, you might as well put two chapters together. Also, this isn't romantic at all. It might be going there, but I don't see it.
I appreciate readers taking the time to leave comments or mail me feedback.
I feel I need to remind the readers of my note at the start of chapter 1. Complicated is not a series. It's just one story that I submitted to Lit in chapter form (I submitted the entire story over a week ago).
I've realised that when looking at the chapters individually they don't appear very romantic, because I didn't write them as individual stories. However, I can see merit in the feedback of changing the story category- I'll submit the change request once the admin is done updating all chapters.
And apologies for the typos and grammatical errors- I need to work on my editing skills. :)
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Anonymous05/21/14
Hey, wait up SP!
I am just reading this now and I think its fantastic!! I read your note at the beginning of 'ch.1' and I can also read between the lines. Put this story whether you think it should be. Thanks for a fabulous story! x
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This isn't in the slightest romantic.
These are too short. Even though you post regularly, you might as well put two chapters together. Also, this isn't romantic at all. It might be going there, but I don't see it.
Thank you!
I appreciate readers taking the time to leave comments or mail me feedback.
I feel I need to remind the readers of my note at the start of chapter 1. Complicated is not a series. It's just one story that I submitted to Lit in chapter form (I submitted the entire story over a week ago).
I've realised that when looking at the chapters individually they don't appear very romantic, because I didn't write them as individual stories. However, I can see merit in the feedback of changing the story category- I'll submit the change request once the admin is done updating all chapters.
And apologies for the typos and grammatical errors- I need to work on my editing skills. :)
Hey, wait up SP!
I am just reading this now and I think its fantastic!! I read your note at the beginning of 'ch.1' and I can also read between the lines. Put this story whether you think it should be. Thanks for a fabulous story! x
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