You built the story up so well. I was so excited, but then it seemed like the sex scene was so quickly put together. There were so many sexy routes it could have gone.
Any story that gives me a stiffy automatically gets four stars. I gave yours five. Nicely done. Although it was perhaps a little shorter than I would have preferred, I enjoyed the realism of the story. Congrats on your first submission. Keep writing!
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Anonymous05/14/14
Hot, but
it ended too soon. Will be looking for a continuation.
Not one cheap shot! You have accomplished a miracle! Seriously, it is a very good story.**** If the stranger had gotten the full course I would have made it *****.
I really enjoyed your story but like others that have commented it left me wanting more. My wish would have been for him to stay the night, or part 2 lets open this wife up with some huge cock!
Loved the story just a shame you didn't go all the way
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Anonymous05/15/14
Losers
The punks who read these stories then attack the content in misspelled posts are the true "fags". If you don't like this shit, why are you here? Fucking losers.
I enjoyed the story immensely. There were no 10" dick lovers, no gang bangs, no prostitution of the wife, no humiliation of the husband in fact non of the cliches that generally make up a literotica Loving Wife story. And yet the comments are all asking the writer to push his characters to over the top sexual excess. This story is about a couple who are in love with each other and are secure in their feelings for one another. One gets the impression that this is a one off for if it were to go further the tremendous respect the wife has for her husband would soon dissipate and the marriage inevitably destroyed. Thanks for the story it was fun.
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Anonymous05/17/14
Wow
Agree with other posts that this story was right on the mark with a "proper" wife sharing. Fits the category beautifully. May I have another, please?.
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Anonymous05/22/14
Sharing
This story was not so much about sharing, j ust watching, Nevertheless it was still highly erotic. Thank You.
English
Pretty Good
You built the story up so well. I was so excited, but then it seemed like the sex scene was so quickly put together. There were so many sexy routes it could have gone.
Excellent story
Any story that gives me a stiffy automatically gets four stars. I gave yours five. Nicely done. Although it was perhaps a little shorter than I would have preferred, I enjoyed the realism of the story. Congrats on your first submission. Keep writing!
Hot, but
it ended too soon. Will be looking for a continuation.
WOW!
Not one cheap shot! You have accomplished a miracle! Seriously, it is a very good story.**** If the stranger had gotten the full course I would have made it *****.
Hot!
Fuck...when's part 2 coming out?
Great start but...
I really enjoyed your story but like others that have commented it left me wanting more. My wish would have been for him to stay the night, or part 2 lets open this wife up with some huge cock!
Most Interesting Man
Good and Hot ...
BUT
the most interesting man in the world drinks Dos Equis (when he drinks beer) and he is NOT finished after a blowjob, no matter HOW good it is!
4*
nice
Loved the story just a shame you didn't go all the way
Losers
The punks who read these stories then attack the content in misspelled posts are the true "fags". If you don't like this shit, why are you here? Fucking losers.
An Original...
I enjoyed the story immensely. There were no 10" dick lovers, no gang bangs, no prostitution of the wife, no humiliation of the husband in fact non of the cliches that generally make up a literotica Loving Wife story. And yet the comments are all asking the writer to push his characters to over the top sexual excess. This story is about a couple who are in love with each other and are secure in their feelings for one another. One gets the impression that this is a one off for if it were to go further the tremendous respect the wife has for her husband would soon dissipate and the marriage inevitably destroyed. Thanks for the story it was fun.
Wow
Agree with other posts that this story was right on the mark with a "proper" wife sharing. Fits the category beautifully. May I have another, please?.
Sharing
This story was not so much about sharing, j ust watching, Nevertheless it was still highly erotic. Thank You.
Great start!
Hope that you write more stories soon! I love red heads to boot!
HOT
Nice story for a start, but the wife should have been fucked,
More stories please, think you have a vivid imagination
Yeah......good
Seemed a bit rushed towards the end but other than that I liked it.
first time delight
very hot...erotic....similar to our "first time"
Great Story
Very sexy, loved your perspective.
eat shit dear annony
I gave this a 5
Good work
My wife is very hot, but devastated she didn't get fucked lol
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