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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous05/15/14

nice stuff

girl, your piece could have been more descriptive about the lovemaking procedure..... it was more of foreplay in the story.... interesting read anyway

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by Anonymous05/15/14

perfection

I loved it bc it was a perfect pace and i could see everything, be her. This is my type of sex. :)

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by guysimple167405/18/14

Again, just right

Just the right amount of character and detailed physical act to build the eroticism.
Keep reveling in the new situations that you keep on creating!

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by Anonymous11/20/16

Good read!

I liked the story and premise! Would like to see this continue! Thank you!

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