girl, your piece could have been more descriptive about the lovemaking procedure..... it was more of foreplay in the story.... interesting read anyway
I loved it bc it was a perfect pace and i could see everything, be her. This is my type of sex. :)
Just the right amount of character and detailed physical act to build the eroticism. Keep reveling in the new situations that you keep on creating!
I liked the story and premise! Would like to see this continue! Thank you!
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nice stuff
girl, your piece could have been more descriptive about the lovemaking procedure..... it was more of foreplay in the story.... interesting read anyway
perfection
I loved it bc it was a perfect pace and i could see everything, be her. This is my type of sex. :)
Again, just right
Just the right amount of character and detailed physical act to build the eroticism.
Keep reveling in the new situations that you keep on creating!
Good read!
I liked the story and premise! Would like to see this continue! Thank you!
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