son finds out...and joins in!!!
Again, not able to rate this the 5 it deserves, but hoping next chapter is coming!!!!
If it is in fact, your first story.....kudos. Well paced, good characters, believable plot. I am not sure about the son joining into her favors, but if it's on the QT ....go for it. Thanks Don
Quite enjoyed it-lucky boy, nice dialogue-would love to read a 3rd section
Your second chapter was a great continuation of this story. Keep the story line coming. On Ch 1 I gave you a four star, this Ch I gave you a deserved five star rating.
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Part 3...
son finds out...and joins in!!!
Anxiously awaiting part three!
Again, not able to rate this the 5 it deserves, but hoping next chapter is coming!!!!
For a first story.....
If it is in fact, your first story.....kudos. Well paced, good characters, believable plot.
I am not sure about the son joining into her favors, but if it's on the QT ....go for it.
Thanks Don
Hot!
Quite enjoyed it-lucky boy, nice dialogue-would love to read a 3rd section
Once again the neighbor helped the divorcee-to-be in her need
Your second chapter was a great continuation of this story. Keep the story line coming. On Ch 1 I gave you a four star, this Ch I gave you a deserved five star rating.
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