Outcast's Revenge Ch. 01

An editor

You need one. not a bad story, but FULL of typos.

This is grossly misogynistic.

Revenge?

Really?
Revenge for what? For not living up to his expectations/sense of entitlement?
Nobody owes you shit for being nice. You're supposed to be nice to other people, it's what you're supposed to be, what you're supposed to behave like.

Serious issues with women

This an extremely creepy, borderline violently misogynistic fantasy. You seem to have grossly warped views on what women are and what they qnd the world supposedly owe you (nothing). Stop letting society brainwash you into this sense of entitlement and seek help.

Eerie

This story could have been written by that douchebag who just murdered six people in California. I highly recommend the author get some therapy. Seriously.

not to shabby

wasnt a bad story i think a person's views are that their views and their own world should be viewed as such just cause one's story did not collide with your outwordly view on life should not lead to bashing them i liked this story for what i was creative and obscene please write more it was nice make it longer next time pls

I liked it

Good story. needs editing though