It's such an odd way to end the story. Even if it's a first chapter, it's an odd place to end -- right in the middle of the action. I wanted to like this story, but it was a little too bizarre. They all just drop their pants and start measuring their dicks? WTF?
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It's such an odd way to end the story. Even if it's a first chapter, it's an odd place to end -- right in the middle of the action. I wanted to like this story, but it was a little too bizarre. They all just drop their pants and start measuring their dicks? WTF?
"A" for effort, but two stars for the story.
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