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My First Time at a Club

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by swingerjoe05/18/14

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...but if they were, I'd give this a solid "2". I completely understand how erotic and exciting it can be to have sex with someone for the first time...but what on earth was in it for her? He got an awesome blowjob from a girl he just met. She...learned to deep throat from having him force her mouth onto him?

And as soon as he was done, her fun was over? He couldn't man-up and give her some pleasure? If they had a Dom/sub relationship, I could understand her motivation. Otherwise, it sure looks like she was used by some selfish douchebag like a human sex toy. Nothing erotic about that.

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by TREKnRay05/27/14

My First Time at a Club

Maybe the young woman was lucky she was shown the door. I don't know what to think about the guy. He might have been a serial killer. At the very least he was a serial asshole. He saw her wrist band and realized she was naive.

I liked the story until the very end.

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