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thats what i want to know wtf?no build up just jerk it and she blows him?
have to agree
you wasted your time and the sites space by posting a sloppy rushed middle of a story. where's the beginning? where's the plot? where's the character developmnet? where's the end?
you tease!
too short. love the sister's body. more please!
Just Far Too Short
One of those stories where you just wish the author had finished it. Or at least written enough to get INTO the story. The thinking is normally that the reader will wait for more...sometimes we don't...
way to short
more ASAP
You can write
But you don't have a story to tell. Come back when you do.
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Because I hate lazy fucking writers who tease readers. Come back when you have a readable story.
WHAT!
Where is the rest of the STORY??? NOT LEAVE PEOPLE HANGING it is not nice!!!
Good story what happens next
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