All Comments on 'You Make Me Feel'

This is a nice poem. Just two suggestions to possibly improve the flow of the poem:

> Switch the second and third set of lines around - this shows the progression and links one to another

> move the word 'enough, up to the previous line - where it is now there is emphasis on it implying "just enough to get by" instead of what is accomplished

Very heartfelt and I connected with the poem more than you could imagine. Thank you for sharing it.

expressed so nicely. Brave enough to face your demons, little one